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Jasmine by =neolestat:iconneolestat:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Spontaneous Portraits

©2006-2009 =neolestat
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Artist's Comments

A camera, a pier, a pretty girl... what more could one ask for? More to come...

Model: *Jazminexxx

If leaving a comment please be respectful to the model but by all means feel free to critique the photo and my technique.

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=neolestat Apr 26, 2006, 2:43:25 PM
AFI?

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*sighs* "Take your thumb out of the cat Andy..."
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~antycake Apr 26, 2006, 2:47:34 PM
Hence Jasmine's sweater. Heh heh.
By the way, I really like the composition of this picture, you usually don't see full body shots very often. (Well, atleast I don't.) :}
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=neolestat Apr 26, 2006, 2:58:23 PM
doh me! ;p

thank you much for the compliment :D

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*sighs* "Take your thumb out of the cat Andy..."
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!Attack-Of-The-Haha Apr 26, 2006, 3:13:22 PM
beautiful

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*rjcarroll Apr 26, 2006, 4:51:09 PM
Nice work Andy! You are on your way! Good positioning and dimentional lighting. The only thing here I see here or rather don't see is her hands, can look a little unnatural. You may find this nitpicky but there is a visible string from her coat lower right. Those types of minute details are the things that really kill me when I miss them during a shoot. In real life they are glossed over without a second glance, in a photo they can be glaring. Something to keep in mind. Great job with a lovely model! :clap:

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Art is the proper task of life. - Friedrich Nietzsche (1844 - 1900)
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~xblondegothx Apr 26, 2006, 4:51:29 PM
aww, very nice indeed! (and i LOVE her boots hehe)
xx

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...More and more, it feels like I'm doing a really bad impersonation of myself...
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~spyderraver Apr 26, 2006, 6:01:24 PM
I see what you're doing here. This is really good.
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*aspi Apr 27, 2006, 12:29:46 AM
aww pretty girl :aww:
very natural
I'd like to see more of the background maybe
to compare it better to the model
otherwise it's good portrait

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In order to exist just once in the world, it is necessary never again to exist. - Albert Camus :camera:
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April 26, 2006
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Canon
Canon EOS 20D
1/320 second
F/5.6
59 mm
1600
Apr 26, 2006, 6:46:15 PM

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